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I really like the elements of this composition and the way they relate to one another. But this is a case where centering the image (along the vertical axis) would help. Its got a very natural bilateral symmetry interrupted only by the fork. I think I'd also 'shop out that little array of white dots to the left of the seated woman - distracting and easily turned black.

Bel progetto,ma un po disordinato,:-))paul

Interesting and original composition!