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Sergei, I actually like this image a lot, except for the typewriter.  For me, it poses no value add.  If I can get it attached I removed it to see what you think.  I also lightened the rather harsh shadows.  See how you feel about it.  Great shot!!!

Look, I don't post here a lot, I do look a lot for inspiration. I like Sergei's art a lot, sometimes I don't get it completely and sometimes not at all but the one thing I believe is inviolate is that its his art as presented. In line with this did the previous critic request permission to submit an edit? If not In my mind its way out of line and the comment akin to suggesting that a traditionally built woman, doesn't sweat much.......

Whew!  Well, I guess you told me, didn't you Chris?!  Since you don't post here a lot, perhaps you didn't know that our fellow photogs often do just what I did to help the submitting photog visualize what you are proposing.  The submitting photographer can take it or leave it... it's only sharing ideas and suggestions.

No, it is absolutely not in violation of someone else's image, as you are merely reposting it... not for your own use whatsoever.  Sergei shouldn't be offended, and you certainly shouldn't.  Most of us are always very appreciative when one or more of our peers takes the time to share his or her ideas in such a manner.

@michael

You did not get the Sergei's joke. He is playing with words and their different meanings.

hard print

to print hard

to print = to write

it's hard to print photo by typewriter... so, she looks tired

Maybe, author sees himself as a story teller?

There are many paths to take to interpret this full of symbols photograph. Just need to try.

I love!

very nice concept..

First of all - perfect model for the performance.

Good light and shadows, but the most important is the Photographer's vision is beyond, beyond the mainstream...

A+!:)