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Very strict expression though!

Cheers Jim!

PDE

An attractive pose and very nicely composed picture, bravo. I would be tempted to try it from a slightly lower perspective, so as to elongate the body more, but I know that you enjoy experimenting in this area. 

The cross structure of the building is not cooperating with the composition.

The black line is crossing the body unless you did it like that to suggest some power of the girl. Not only the sight but also picturing a male attribute with the black line.

Light and shadows are excellent.

I do like the composition and I like the diagonal. I might have liked it more if it had gone across the frame entirely.

I just love the way she is looking at the camera. It is as if you upset her. A great pose.

This is meant to be dramatic, not glamorous.

Jim Phelps