burakertem 0 Posted March 17, 2011 a scenery full of suspense like Hitchcock. First you only see the person with the bag and at the second glance you notice the shadow coming from the left. Great street shot. Regards, Burak Link to comment
rscherding 0 Posted March 17, 2011 There is some great drama here and the title plants the seed of that drama in the viewer's head. but a close® crop would, in my opinion, bring us into the scene a little better, a small crop to just before the first fluorescent lights would bring our field of view right up close to the scene. as it sits now i feel removed from your drama, but bring me closer to the action and i think it will just give the story a little more gravity, as well as giving the shadow more emphasis as it will be a foreground element rather than something further away.Keep shootingryan Link to comment
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