Portrait

I think you should crop just a tiny little bit at the top, doing so will rienforce the composition, other than that this is an excellent portrait. Lighting, color, make-up, costume and pose is great and I especially like the addition and placement of the fan, this is very reminiscent of an 18th century painting, I wish I could have done this one myself! congrats.

Not exactly though, this one looks much better! The pose seems to be more natural and relaxed!I don't see any need of cropping or anything else!

PDE

You achieved a very classical look with this shot, I like it alot. I'm not so sure about the left hand but the overall image is good.

Regards.