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© Copyright for Jakub Kielar

A photo from a picnic


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In fact it was B&W Konica 100

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© Copyright for Jakub Kielar

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The sepia atracted me to the picture,good dof,right forearm a little too bright.Shadow over right cheek

separates her neck from face too abrubt.

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Nice capture of a moment. She looks really puzzled, as if she's wondering "is it ok what I'm doing now". If it's gasoline in the bottle... I think I'd have the same expression on my face :D Too bad she holds her barbeque equipment so oddly.
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I'm not usre what the subject is here. The sepia is nice but not enough to make this more than an average snapshot.

 

Did you rate your own photo? A bit curious!

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I have no problem to spot a subject in here and I also will second the advantages of the warm sepia toning what make the overall eye catching. However , I find the sky and her arm overdone and bleeched out what detracts a bit. Natural pose works fine for me as the facila expression. Not to sure about framing , picture not balanced IMHO. Still a good try. Best Regards PK.
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I like the composition and use of sepia tones. I also like her pose, expression, and the fog coming out of the ice bucket. However, Piotr has a good point about the burn out on the arm and in the sky.

 

Best Wishes,

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Sabat? ;)

mo¿na wg mnie przyciac troche z lewej...tzn do ramienia.. no i pare milimetrow z prawej chociaz niekoniecznie..

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