robertsarkozi 0 Posted February 10, 2011 Shot in my hometown on one of its hidden streets. What do you think? Please give any opinions, as all are appreciated. Thanks. Link to comment
davidmeiner 3 Posted February 11, 2011 The colors are interesting. I like the geometric shapes and how they contrast with the two round areas at the upper left. The peeling paint works well with the blue tagging/graffiti/whatever on the right-hand structure. Link to comment
olafdevries 0 Posted February 12, 2011 For me, the focuspoint is the window, however it's a bit floating now. Try a crop on the left, just two or three mm, at the same time at the bottom on the left, untill the start of that asphalted bow. Now the window is centrated. Regards..! Link to comment
robertsarkozi 0 Posted February 13, 2011 You are right, but I wasn't focusing only on the window.If you observe, everything is in focus, and the reason why I included the road bow too, is that I wanted to show its curve. The ideas was to show a bit of rounded form amongst the rectangular and square shapes.If I crop I believe the window would not float any more, but I would hide the bottom part of the right wall edge as well as the road.Thanks for commenting. ;)Regards,Robert Link to comment
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