out of sight

I think you had the beginnings of a good idea, but there are a few things that just don't work for me. The top & bottom right corners mainly. The top is just enough in focus to be distracting because you can't really tell what it is, not that you would want to. It doesn't look interesting enough that I'd even want to see it. The bottom corner is just too bright and out of focus that also makes it distracting.

Next time get rid of whatever is at the top, and you can fix the other corner by moving back far enough so that ALL of the subject is in focus, and then crop if needed after that. Remember that you can always crop out something that you don't want to show, but you can't add what is not there.  If you want to do a lot of this type work try a LOT of variations and learn what works and what doesn't.  Your images will get a LOT better.

Unusual motif, but it may be recognized as an original one! My best regards Ilkka!

PDE

Thank you Paul & Pierre! Best regards

I like it llkka... especially the tones!

...and a bit of sensual mistery!

Thank you Michael & Maurizio! Warm regards

Thank you Michael! Warm regards

Again interesting a work.. Regards..

An attractive shot in your own style. Best regards.

Thank you Mehmet & Sumon! Warm regards

Estupenda toma y excelente encuadre, con una magnifica luz y b&w.

Un cordial saludo -Tolo.