Old factory

This is a shot taken of an old factory with lots of broken windows. What do

you think?

Thanks for your comments.

I would suggest another approach to this interesting motif. I can imagine a frontal point of view with all the windows like a huge mosaic, and perhaps a person looking out of one window if possible, that can be a suspenseful scenery. Regards, Burak
 

Hi Robert. if we go with the shot which you may or may not be able to revisit . the variety of color in the building is maybe helped by a sky crop from right to edge of structure.it may be too much to lose the tree twigs in the top left corner as far as your vision is concerned. overall it is easy to sit at a desk on the computer and comment than know how much effort you spent on the presentation. ..regards miken neat shot

Hi,

I appreciate both your comments, I must admit, you are both right. The composition could have been other, or vertical even.

I have another shot of the factory, but of the other end of it. It is the picture named "The other end". Maybe the same composition could have been used for this one, too, but the two would have resulted in very little differences.

Thanks again for your time, the critiques are constructive. ;)

Robert