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Here the document also won the aesthetic dimension!
I love the colors and the slight deviation is not exactly in the center of the frame.
That and the white right (with wire) give some tension to the image.

The architecture also helps. Squares, strips, games shadow ... I think you should try to explore more that "marriage"(documentary / art). The document would be more appealing.

Obrigado,

Miguel

…”the slight deviation of the vanishing point from the center of the frame”!...

Regards,

Miguel

Miguel said all! I would only suggest erasing those tubes and wires on the right wall and maybe straightening up the verticals! "Maybe" -  because I think they may contribute to the composition increasing the feeling of perspective!

PDE