2009-07-23_00231

I continue to be a persistent critic in your way of presenting your vast documentary work, which is rich and precious.

However, as I always say you should devote more time to editing. This biulding, which I quite like, almost went unnoticed to me.

A correction in the perspectic effect (just to give one example) would give more emphasis to the "document" and thus "justice" to the work itself, which I really liked.

Congrats, M.