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I think the portrait is emotionally cold, no eye contact, no integrity, too much of photoshop. It though has its right to exist, it resembles the fashion shot where a model is aloof, I also find the crop not to be perfect.

Regards.

You created a very strong composition, original. Her eyes really shine thru all the coloured fabric, it's an image that makes you want to take a deeper look.

Best of luck.

I don't like often the plastic look of digital images! With film material a plastic look is not possible, if not plastinized by PS after scanning.