davidmccracken 2 Posted December 17, 2010 I am 100% sure that's not the table I would like you to photograph a girl on. Indeed it might not be a table. Love the image and her connection with the camera. Link to comment
andrzejp 7 Posted December 17, 2010 David,It is a coffee table. Thanks for your visit Link to comment
starvy 7 Posted December 17, 2010 Andrew I look at this exquisite model and wonder what more could be done to focus on just her beauty. I have several minor gripes with your approach. The background is too prominent. I like your soft treatment of her face. It is certainly flattering but I am seeing her and what is behind her. The table is an issue but so because the model is not quite occupying the centre of the frame. Link to comment
andrzejp 7 Posted December 18, 2010 Starvey, Thank you very much for your visit and for your comments. You have some good points that I have not considered. Link to comment
lightworks 0 Posted December 18, 2010 A stunning image. Splendid use of pose and a truly electric expression by Sarah. Excellent composition and gorgeous work by both of you. Link to comment
Pierre Dumas 260 Posted December 18, 2010 Hey Andrew, this model requires colors by my opinion cause she has skin complexion rarely seen on nudes, I think you have to emphasize it! Cheers!PDE Link to comment
gooseberry 0 Posted April 17, 2011 Starvy Goodfellows wrote: The background is too prominent. The table is an issue but so because the model is not quite occupying the centre of the frame.I second Starvy on the background (so have blurred it), but model's placement as well as the table work for me fine (except the non-reflection as marked on my edit in red ;)Also have boosted contrast (both local and mid-tone), but only on the model. Link to comment
andrzejp 7 Posted April 17, 2011 Tomek, See the new post. I hope that you will be happy with it. Link to comment
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