Appeal

Fine exercise, Mircea, technically immaculate - shallow dof, conversion and cut included. Compliments!

Great available lighting used!

PDE

But there are multiple compositional problems. The steel rod crossing the model's head is certainly disturbing, so is the fact that the model's neck and left jaw are hidden behind someone's head.

I would have preffered a more subject-based composition.

Cheers.

A good enviromental portrait, filled with warmth, a portrait of a beautiful young woman. Well done.