Guest Guest Posted December 9, 2010 I really like this Francois. The muted colors work very well here. She has great eye contact with the camera and a very relaxed, natural pose.If I may make a few suggestions. I think a vertical rather than square crop would suit this image better. It would eliminated some of the extra negative space to her left. Also, there is a shadow directly to the right of her, which is easily blended away with PS's healing tool, to give a more seamless lighting. Link to comment
raymondborg 0 Posted December 9, 2010 Great lighting and beautiful composition. Love the eye contact of the model with the camera. Congrats. Link to comment
rkemp 0 Posted December 10, 2010 Perfect the way it is. Some people find it hard to look at a picture on it's own terms and see what it has to say. Instead they decide what it should be saying and then try to change it. Link to comment
kenb 0 Posted December 10, 2010 Great pose, expression and tonal composition. I think both crops work well . Link to comment
francois_benveniste1 0 Posted December 10, 2010 Thanks to all and to Keith. I think I like his version better as to the removal of the shadow. But I will keep my negative space. I think negative space tells a lot ;) Only a matter of eprception, no one can be right or wrong here ;) Link to comment
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