The Magic Lantern

Can she see you?

Feedback appreciated.

Highly creative / innovative shot, Dave. BR / Volker

Very nice original work, David!

Volker, Perhaps not too creative but hopefully a little different at least. Thanks a lot.

Ruud, Perhaps not too orginal but hopefully a little different at least. Thanks a lot.

I like it.  Very nice facial expression.  Normally I am not to fond of portraits with the face in the middle, but here it works well. The only thing i see for further improvement is the left part of the face.  I wonder if making some structure visible by lightening up this part of the face would result in a stronger picture.

Ben

Thanks for your helpful comment. I too am not too keen on central portraits shot in landscape. I do think this works because of her gaze. As for the rest of what you say. I can only say that you are probably correct.

Ben makes a good point, but I like it this way too, like looking at the half moon I guess. She has a very interesting face & I like how her bent arm is in the picture. Also I like all the convergence is the buildings behind her.  I really like this one David.

I am not sure I deserve your words but I will pretend I do. Thanks a lot!