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love this one, she looks amazingly gorgeous!

Fabrizio.

She is a pretty girl with a lovely figure. You have focused well on her eyes. She has good eye contact with the camera (viewer) and a nice expression. Her skin tone is very good. Although it breaks some posing "rules", I really like this pose. It works very well for her. Her make-up and manicure look very good. She just comes across looking like a dancer -- very nicely toned legs and bottom -- great posture.

The background is nicely out of focus, but watch out for any shadows from your subject on the background.

She has multiple catchlights in her left eye. One catchlight per eye is preferred. 

The lighting on her face is rather flat. Judicious use of shadows can add interest and help to create a nice illusion of depth within your photograph.

Turning her head back towards the camera has caused some wrinkles on her neck. These should be softened.

The detail in her panties and stockings is very good. I wish there was better detail in her top.

I like the hair swept over her right eye, but the rest of her hair is a little messy looking. It looks a little too "windblown" for indoors.

She looks somewhat squished into the frame. She needs a little more room around her.

The date and your name are not part of the photograph. It would be quite appropriate to place them on a mat surrounding your photograph.

Nice shot,

Mark

L'idea pe questa posa è tua o sua? Lo scatto mi piace molto, ma la posa e il volto così incorniciato/celato dai capelli sono stupendi! Bravi, tu e lei!

credo che l'idea della posa sia di fabrizio, ha ragione mau sul volto incorniciato dai capelli ma ha dimenticato lo specchio che sul fondo riflette alla perfezione nonostante lo sfocato. bellissimo ritratto

I think that when dark fabrics lose texture it is appropriate to modify them.  I have done a quick try here to show you.

I strongly disagree with Mark - my advice is to leave your copyright notice on the body of the photo. Any one who wanted to steal your photo could trim a border off quickly and easily.

Jerry

I like the contrast of the original image, I think Jerry's version looks washed out.  As for the copyright, I think the intention of the photo dictates what should be done.  If the intent is to be a photograph in an artistic way, then I have to side with Mark and leave it off the photo, it is not part of it.  If it is to be used for fashion, a model portfolio, or such, it is very common practice to have the copyright or photogs name or logo on the image. 

Your model is charming and very innocent with her expression but again she showed very original feeling to this wonderful image.

Your lighting here is so well set and so the the details and the DOF of which brought the background and a remarkable manner, the contrast and tone are other great factors adding to the superb composition of this amazing work.

Thank you my friend for sharing it and wishing you all of the best.

Beautiful camera angle here, I don't think I would change a  thing. superb full frame presentation.

Clap! Clap! Complimenti anche da parte mia. Ciao Fabrizio!

As always! Ciao Fabrizio!

PDE

a most beautiful capture of a woman's neck and curve of the shoulder. also, wow, she gets more and more beautiful with every shot, if you don't mind me saying, Fabrizio! dp

unusual and yet perfect pose and the reflection in the mirror is simply amazing. congratulations, zsolt

Beautiful Fabrizio! Her expression and 'glimmer' in her eyes is one of love and affection - there's no escaping it, and quite frankly I can almost feel it. A very original pose, yet while posing it has such a natural feel.   Wonderful black and white tones as is always displayed in your work.  Her 'ease' in front of the camera is delightful to see.....for some reason, she must truly like her photographer ! :- }................LOVELY!

The 'fat' flash here is somewhat mitigated by reflection from the walls, but it is still not the most flattering light. The subject does seem remarkably at ease in an extremely difficult pose.

Great portrait! Best regards, Ilkka

I've just started checking out your work and this is one of the first shots that really caught my eye.  (But I must say I find most of your work outstanding!)

There's a simplicity to this shot that's very appealing, and a tenderness... almost a vulnerability.  Very nice!

I just wish the black top held a little more detail than it does (and I have a calibrated monitor).  That would have made it perfect.