scg 0 Posted November 15, 2010 good arrangement. only one suggestion; the white-ish portion of the background could have been a little darkened Link to comment
ferdinand 0 Posted November 15, 2010 Perfectly done, and in particular the lighting is absolutely right. Like an old painting. Link to comment
vaar 0 Posted November 16, 2010 Very good work as usual, Conrado! Do I smell here manchego? :) Might be "simple lunch" of "simple people" - at least I feel simplicity conveyed strongly in the composition, choice of objects, and arrangement. At the same time there are details that are done very well - towel edges that make shadows and add to depth of composition, objects positioned to provide depth, and all of course with very good lighting. I agree with Ramani, central part has "bright spot" feel, that does not match to edges. I would say white small brush or pencil vertical strokes are not matching diagonal wide brush strokes in other parts of background. Well, you know, trying to critique strong work by finding small weaknesses here and there ;) More of personal preference things :) Congratulations with one more piece of art! Vardan Link to comment
pepmir 0 Posted November 17, 2010 Quizá un día logre esa sensación de realidad que logras tu... quizá un día me sea fácil componer...De momento me queda imaginar que toco cada uno de estos objetos que nos enseñas.Un abrazo. Link to comment
Guest Guest Posted November 17, 2010 Very creative work with excellent lighting,the choice of tablecloth and background compliment the image very well,composition wise it tells a story,a farmers breakfast or lunch,another excellent choice is the old items like knife and pot.a very beautiful image,regards Link to comment
luc_marg 0 Posted December 22, 2010 Beautiful work ! Congratulations ! Your pictures is a really still life lessons... Link to comment
cphilpott 0 Posted January 2, 2011 This piece is excellent, the simplicity of the food and earth tones of the jug work very well. One comment, the glass tumbler and the jug are too different from each other. Happy new year. Link to comment
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