steve_lowther 0 Posted November 10, 2010 Others may want to comment on whether they agree or not, but I am thinking this image is almost in key, but not quite. I think your image could improve if the eye were not led off the page with the lighter jacket. I also whitened her scleras and the catch lights in her eyes a bit as well as adding some subtle vignetting to the image. Link to comment
sarahgale 0 Posted November 10, 2010 Nice image. I personally find her hand a bit distracting and awkward... it doesn't seem naturally placed. It might have worked better if you had asked her to turn slightly more toward the wall. Link to comment
matthijs 0 Posted November 10, 2010 Disturbing expression, disturbing composition. I like it. (If however that was not your intention it's time to reshoot...) Maybe a tad more depth of field or focus a little more to the back? All the best, Matthijs. Link to comment
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