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Euphoric Dream


Elstad

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Raymond,

I don't think it is a very good idea to show this pretty girl's skin bulging out over the top of her stockings and at her thigh and waist. Dark armpits are a no-no, too. I think there is a little too much skin showing at her crotch area.

The repetitive angles at her knees, the 90˚ angle at her elbow on her right arm and her hand positions are not particularly feminine or graceful looking. They certainly are not elegant. That top just does nothing for her or for her 'outfit'.

The placement of her left foot and the angle to the camera makes her foot look huge. Be careful of foreshortening. The highlight on the end of her shoe should be toned down.

Watch for catchlights and try to stay away from split profiles.

The compositional placement of your subject is quite nice. The background is nicely burned-in. Her skin tone and her make-up look very good.

Mark

 

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I think if I got myself in that position, euphoric is the last word that would come to mind. An interesting shot of a rather bendy young lady.

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