sruti

plz comment.

IMHO A little bright, just a little. Light source a little further back. Need a bit more shadows on the face. Beautiful young lady. Regards, Bernie

I would suggest retouching to soften the lines under the eyes.

Jerry

Hi!

Overall it's a nice shot and maybe it's just me but I have a strange feeling that it's slightly out of focus; I mean her eyes are soft. I would prefer them to be sharp, but generally it's a nice one. 

 

Regards,

Adrian

That hint of a smile means she is just about to break out laughing at us guys talking about soft this and soft that. It takes half an hour to take one's eyes - well, okay, my eyes - off that mouth.