Liar

I have been intrigued by this image for some time know (since I saw it on your portfolio).  On one level I find it a quite compelling image, starkly expressed title on source of the vehicle of offense.  Yet on another level...  I am not sure how well the dark, crisp writing (PP?) works on the high-key lips, perhaps the writing needs a bit more blending.  Additionally, I believe the writing would look better if more centered (L to R) on the lips, and maybe the lips would appear better "removed from the face" by cleaning up the remnants of cheek and chin on my right.  These are just some personal observations and opinions, others may vary.  All-in-all, a very good idea, that just needs a bit more refinement.  Thank you for sharing.  Best regards...

-Dave

Thank you for the critique Dave. The writing was written directly on my models lips with eye liner. I see many of your points and may have to revisit this idea at a later time. Thank you again.