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I love the composition of this photograph. The off-kilter camera angle adds to the sense of chaotic, unbridled lust. It has a fantastic quality, due much in part, I think, to the processing you have applied. The luminosity of the models in the foreground really calls the viewer's attention, and they are positioned beautifully. The pool boy, I think, is a crucial part of the composition as well, adding an element voyeurism, which in turn contributes to the blasé air of the women since they are so obviously disregarding his existence. That said, I think that he gets just a little lost in the background. I think if his torso and face were lightened just a bit, he would balance better in the composition. Just my opinion though. Overall, I think this is a fantastic image. It communicates itself incredibly well, and evokes many questions, answers and emotions. You should be proud of it!

Wade