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Yalcin, 

This is a very diffent sunset than most.  I like the silhouetted figures but I am confused that the wall seems to tip over and not be vertical.  Is that distortion because of the angle?  Also I do not think so much black space on the right is adding anything to the image.  Since I was not there and am only assuming that I know what was, I played with a newer crop to see what I could do.  It is uploaded to show you my thinking but I understand that I may not have it right.

Regards,

Jerry