awaraagard 0 Posted September 2, 2010 What profound display of how to shoot a portrait! regards! Link to comment
jerrymat 5 Posted September 3, 2010 Emmanuel, I like the tonality and the side-lighted face in profile but I would suggest that your compositional placement could be improved. Notice that the nose is almost dead center in the available space. The eyes are looking through the right side and that makes that right side black space very important. The space behind the head is dead space and does not help the impact of your picture. Just for an experiment try cropping left of the ear to get rid of that dead space.My regards,Jerry Matchett Link to comment
Emmanuel Enyinwa 0 Posted September 3, 2010 Thanks for your thoughtful critique, but more importantly, the time you took to make the changes. On looking at your version, I have to agree with almost 100% of what you did. I just might recrop this or take that into account on subsequent pictures. Thanks again. Link to comment
thadley 15 Posted September 3, 2010 Excellent - learned a few things about portraits from your image and the critiques. Link to comment
photo by patsy dunn 1 Posted September 7, 2010 Emmanuel, Wonderful control of lighting with amazing details. Take care, Patsy Link to comment
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