Ahhhhh...

I am impressed with the amount of detail evident in this image. I am not sure I truly 'get it' to be honest. I am also unsure about the proximity of the background. It is an interesting shot.

Ahhh , indeed ! I can almost hear her sigh ! A very detailed shot, maybe over detailed . I can see what you were trying for , but a couple of things niggle me . The lack of space on the right , she looks very cramped in the frame . There is an almost white area on the inner edge of  the top border and I'm not sure about the shadow on the background .Bill