Untitled

by Jouhtinen Anne

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Gallery: Scotland

Tags: seeking critique

Category: Landscape

Exif Information:
Make : Canon
Model : Canon EOS 550D
Date Time Original : 2010-07-25 18:08:10
Focal Length : 85/1
Shutter Speed Value : 1/256
Exposure Time : 1/250
Aperture Value : 8.0
F Number : 8.0
Iso Speed Ratings : 100
Flash : 16
Metering Mode : 5
Orientation : 1
X Resolution : 72.0000000
Y Resolution : 72.0000000
Software : Adobe Photoshop CS3 Windows

Published: Wednesday 4th of August 2010 12:47:28 PM


Comments

James Dainis
This makes for an interesting abstract or has the feel of an abstract. Otherwise, my feeling is that there is too much blank sky. There are nice tones throughout.

Anne Jouhtinen

Thanks a lot James! You should have seen the sky in the original shot, white and without any visible contrasts. You´re right, it would work better with more tones. All the best for you!

James Dainis
That was one of the advantages of having your own darkroom - you could burn in the sky as needed. Now anyone can do that with Photoshop. If this had been done with film, not digital, I would ask you to look at the negative to see if there are blocked highlights on it. I assume the highlights of the sky were clipped off to the right of the histogram on the original shot. You could have adjusted that to avoid clipping and then recovered the shadows in Photoshop. Film - Expose for the shadows and develop for the highlights Digital - Expose for the highlights and recover the shadows in Photoshop.

Anne Jouhtinen

Thank you very very much James for giving advice, I appreciate it a lot!! Wish you all the best

Anne Jouhtinen
Tide Thank you!

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