Justina

Facundo,

Justina is a very pretty girl.

The lighting is very good, but in bright sunlight you get very harsh shadows.

Her eyes need more light to be seen well. It would help if you focused very carefully on her eyes. They don't look as sharp as they should.

The contrast is quite good, but you could increase the brightness a bit. You have little detail in the dark areas. The light areas could be a little lighter and still retain detail. 

You have quite a problem with foreshortening. Watch for anything closer to the camera than the body. If nearer the camera than her body her feet, knees, hands, elbows and shoulders will look out of proportion to the rest of the body -- larger than normal -- foreshortened. Of course, it doesn't help when you use a wide-angle lens. That can also distort your image.

It looks like she may be in front of a train station or at least on a walkway near a building. There doesn't appear to be any reason for her to be lying on the ground. You should match the location with the girl and her outfit -- and what she is doing there. This just doesn't work. Sometimes your can do this kind of juxtaposition for fashion, product or even beauty photography, but it isn't usual for portrait photography. 

Your name is not part of the photograph. It would be quite proper to place it on a mat surrounding your photograph.

Nice shot,

Mark

Marvelous work my friend. I like it just the way it is... High Drama!
-r-