Tags: seeking critique
Author: Papai Ken
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This is my favorite from your folder. Nice composition and expressive use of minimal color.
My favorite in the folder as well. Pretty unexpected angle and subject. I would suggest to dodge the cloud a bit, though. That would help emphasizing the silhouette of the roof and trees, while at the same time refreshing a bit the image.
Another little problem is imo that the moon is slightly too close to the edge. If I were you, I'd cheat and just move it down a bit in PS. Still, quite a good shot. A 4.5 / O 5.5. Cheers.
Moon over Mill Valley Moonrise in the evening over a foggy Mill Valley, California. One of the final shots I took with my soon-to-be-stolen Canon 35mm system before going 100% digital. I appreciate any and all of your comments! -Ken