Guest Guest Posted July 21, 2010 Andrew,She is a beautiful girl. This is a very well done profile. The composition is very good. You have focused well and she has very good make-up.For me the lighting is a little flat. Judicious use of shadows can add interest and help to create a nice illusion of depth within your photograph.It would be nice to capture a catch light to give more life to her eye.I personally would like a bit less color saturation. Her skin tone looks a little heavy to me. Actually, there is a heaviness to the whole picture. Maybe just making it lighter and taking out a little orange color would do it?Nice shot,Mark Link to comment
Guest Guest Posted July 21, 2010 For me the lighting here and tone are outstanding from a superb portrait work, wishing you all of the best. Link to comment
andrzejp 7 Posted July 21, 2010 Pierre and Rashed - thank you very much for your encouraging comments.Mark, I have a very bright monitor- Apple Cinema display and color looks OK, but it is a bit orange on my other monitor. Thanks a lot for your comments. Link to comment
Guest Guest Posted July 21, 2010 Excellent portrait work Andrew,very good lighting and framing,top marks,Harry Link to comment
Emmanuel Enyinwa 0 Posted February 4, 2011 I like the composition here, but agree with Mark that more contrast, not to mention a bit of color balance (too red) would greatly enhance the overall presentation. Link to comment
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