RB-198

This works very well in B&W. A beautiful image of a beautiful woman.

Jim Phelps

Lighting here is so well balanced, wishing you all of the best.

I agree with previous comments, re pose / lighting etc. Just one little niggling thing for me, her eyes/ head is out of focus. The edge of the RH door and her back foot are sharp. If you like it as it is, fine. 

@Glenn

You are absolutely correct about the focus. It bugged me too, but I didn't catch it until I saw the image full size on my computer. I wish I could have the shot back. Just a quirk of the autofocus on the camera.

Seems awkwardly posed and attempt to be spontaneous may have fallen short just a bit, as with the aforementioned comments on focus. Seems a little hot in several places as well but doesn't really detract from the image too much. Lack of detail in the highlights may actually help to simplify the image and bring the attention back to the main subject. Nice attempt on several counts.

Ooohh .. love thse moments ... beautiful shot, bravo.

Yes, lovely model and very good shot. Bravo.