Play Time

From this (only highly recompressed) original.

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Playful and original.

nice action shot. Background is a little busy Good Eye

Nice dynamics. That the children are sporting roughly the same colors is cool.

 

The background is not pleasing. I would have preferred if you had shot from lower down, so that (1) you could place the left girl's shoes in front of the off-white wall instead of the window, and (2) eliminate the grass and the "floor" on the bottom right.

 

(edit: I meant ""floor" on the bottom left")

 

Excellent. The kids are obviously having a ball, and you caught it just right!

Fine timing, Wayne! And a fine, playful photo overall. Cool that you just caught the front girl's one eye uncovered by hair and the other's hanging not so straight down in motion. And the shoelaces are nice too. Perhaps it would have been better from a lower viewpoint? That would have left you with no grass and may be more room to crop a little less tightly. Not sure, just a guess. Regards,

The kids are wonderful! I can't help wishing that the window blinds and the wall texture were not so crisp. To me, they detract a little. I keep "seeing" the rectangular window frame distracting me from the wonderful geometry the kids are making.

Wooom, this rocks. As said before, good timing and sense of dynamic motion. This time the crop is just right.

Background is a little distracting but you've captured the moment well. Personally I think the angle in the original should have been retained in the crop rather than levelling it... gives more of a "spur of the moment" feel.

Surreal moment.