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Not as successful as some of the others, to me Massimo just not as flattering to subject nor as exciting. I think could be because the wall on the left does not really lead the eye to the subject.  Maybe if the wall were a dark wall it would be a better frame for a lady in her toilet. And allow us all to be voyeurs too...  An elegant model,with nice bone structure nonetheless and that helps a lot as you work with her a lot I think..gs

I agree with some of what Gerry has said. The wall to the left is distracting and takes the eye away from the girl. I believe because it is too centered in the frame. A crop from the left about half way between the edge of the photo and door jamb would bring her in to be more of a focal point.

I am a big fan of yours and absolutely love your work! All the best, R.E. Morris