Reacting to the News (Please click on photo to view larger)

by Kelly Landrum

reacting to the news please click on photo view seeking critique kelly landrum

Gallery: Livingstone College, Beautiful People, May 7, 2010

Tags: seeking critique

Category: Portrait

Exif Information:
Make : Canon
Model : Canon EOS 5D Mark II
Date Time Original : 2010-05-07 16:49:27
Focal Length : 100/1
Shutter Speed Value : 1/128
Exposure Time : 1/125
Aperture Value : 4.0
F Number : 4.0
Iso Speed Ratings : 3200
Flash : 16
Metering Mode : 5
Orientation : 1
X Resolution : 72.0000000
Y Resolution : 72.0000000
Software : Adobe Photoshop CS2 Windows

Published: Friday 21st of May 2010 06:46:58 PM


Comments

Landrum Kelly

Thanks, guys.

Good to see you back as well, Pierre.

Jerry, you are absolutely right.  I took the photo and submitted it as is to persons in charge of such at the College because I wanted everything to be "in context."  I wanted the sense of the larger group to be visible to the viewer to convey a bit of what it was like to be in that particular spot at that specific time.

On an artistic level, however, your conception is vastly superior, and perhaps that is what I should have uploaded to Photo.net.

--Lannie

Pierre Dumas
Fine picture! Life photo!

Hi Landrum, long time no see, howdy?

PDE

Jerry Matchett

Lannie, 

 You have a very powerful expression on this woman's face but you have placed it dead center from left to right - not the most effective compositional placement.  The spare ear on the left margin of the photo does nothing to help either - perhaps distracts.  I strongly advocate cropping.

Sincerely,

Jerry Matchett

Landrum Kelly
Reacting to the News Comments welcome.

--Lannie

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