Whiterock Pier

I am very new to this site, and would appreciate any feedback on this

photo. It was shot last December in the early morning, and i liked

that the frost showed up on the pier planks. People were walking

slowly as it was very slippery, and I used a 2 second exposure to

intentionally blur the individual who passed by.

Usually I like these kind of photos and this one should be no exception. Still it misses strength; it seems too soft. Maybe more contrast or just a bit heavier sky The blurred person now (always only in my opinion!) doesn't 'scare' me at all where I feel it should.

Still this can all easily be corrected and I would like to see in the photo what you saw when you made it. (the ice is not at all obvious for example)