pampolin 1 Posted April 12, 2010 well, it could be better if you open scene and show more the bike. This composition is strange because you don´t show and don´t hide the bike and this makes difference. Or you could give more close to her expression Link to comment
lleben 0 Posted April 12, 2010 I really like her expression, nice lighting and tones, but would suggest removing the bicycle wheel. In general this is a very pleasant image. In a hurry, I made two different crop versions of your image. Hope you don't mind. Best wishes, Ludvik. Link to comment
lleben 0 Posted April 12, 2010 Sorry, didn't know how to attach two image files, so here is version_2. Link to comment
amalsircar 2 Posted April 13, 2010 Bob, very good exposure and tonality. Bike is no big problem for me. Link to comment
soniam 6 Posted April 14, 2010 love the body language you captured. Wonderful depth and contrasts! Link to comment
alberto_quintal 2 Posted April 15, 2010 Fantastic composition, b&w and expression, I hope she solves her problem. Alberto Link to comment
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