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Alexander,

She is a very pretty girl. You have focused well on her eyes. Her skin tone is good. The lighting is very good. She has good catch lights. She has good eye contact with the camera (viewer) and a very pleasant expression. Her hands are posed well. The background is neutral and she is well separated from it. I love her hair. Her make-up looks good.

You could add a little space under her left foot and crop some off the top. This would give you better top and bottom compositional balance. The left and right compositional balance is very good.

The way she has her legs crossed is very masculine and you certainly do not want the bottom of her shoe pointing toward the camera.

Nice shot,

Mark

Alexander,

I like the tone, light and expression of your subject in this shot. I also like the desaturated colors of almost sepia tones, which give the image an aged look that is befitting to your subject and the setting.  Mark has a point regarding the soul of the shoe though.  But overall this is a great shot.  Regards - michel