Caro Nr. 1 Radiant joy of life

Caro Nr. 1 Radiant joy of life

She is one integrant of the dance pop-group "Younited Streetz" in Berlin

Thanks for your comments and critique, I will appreciate them very

much...!

Ricardo

Very good portrait, very beautiful smile and nice framing! Max

Ricardo,

 

Beautiful portrait. Love the background. Take care, Patsy

Maravillosa foto para una linda chica. Su sonrisa ilumina a todos por su alegria que le sale del alma y se nota en su mirada clara y llena de bondad. Ricardo, te has lucido de nuevo. Felicitaciones. Mari

Excelente retrato y bella chica, linda sonrisa, muy bien hecho.

 

Saludos.

 

Alberto

With nice and soft colors and details very good a portrait!.. Impressive.. Well done.. Best regards..

Very beautiful portrait and lovely smile , nice shot .............................. Best regards.

Like the eye contact and tones in this - good Portrait image

Excelente retrato , bella luz, color, simpatía de la Top-Model, Saludos .

Ricardo, muy buena fotografía, la luz es muy buena y me encantó la combinacion de colores, ya que el fondo rosa combina fabuloso con el azul de la blusa, también felicita a la modelo tiene una sonrisa verdaderamente de fotografía y por supuesto la captaste a la perfección..

Felicitaciones y un saludo desde México.

Ricardo,

 

Caro is a very pretty girl. I love her bright and happy smile. It suits her and looks very real. She has very good eye contact with the camera (viewer).

 

Her skin tone is quite nice, but be careful of her pink ear and a few minor pink areas on her face.

 

You have two catch lights in her eyes. One catch light per eye is preferred.

 

Make sure you have carefully focused on the eye that is nearest the camera. Watch your depth of field. I don't see a good reason to have any of her out of focus. An out of focus background is very nice and focuses attention on your subject. Parts of your subject out of focus will draw attention away from what is in focus. It is difficult to go wrong with having the entire subject in focus.

 

You don't want to have her thumb showing in the lower right corner. It is very distracting.

 

I would not have her hunch her left shoulder forward. Have her sit up straight with her shoulders back and her chest forward. Good posture usually looks best. I wouldn't hide her chin behind her shoulder.

 

It would be best to remove any hair the is falling across her eyes. I would whiten her teeth a bit. They have some strange colors on them -- blue/green and a little yellow.

 

The bright blue top and the pink background draws the viewer's attention away from the viewer. You want the viewer's attention to be on her face. More neutral colors for her top and background would work better.

 

Your composition is quite good, but I would extend the left side a bit. Your subject should have more room in front of her than behind. This allows her to be facing into the picture, not out of it. You want to compositionally balance the left and right sides of the photograph. The compositional "rule" for this suggests that you position the tip of the subject's nose in the vertical center of the photograph.

 

You could add a little to the bottom. A little more room on the bottom would better compositionally balance the top and the bottom. As you have it right now you would have to crop into her hair to make it balanced.

 

You could soften her face a little to smooth out her complexion and remove the circles under her eyes. Her pupils are quite dilated. If you use brighter modeling lights or have a brighter area to shoot her in, her eyes will not become so dilated.

 

Thank you for putting your name on the mat where it belongs.

 

This is a very good portrait of a real cutie!

 

Nice shot,

 

Mark

The photography lesson given by Mark is a treasure for me! I am always looking for ways to improve my images and love when someone as knowledgeble as Mark comes by. The model is adorable and the image is fantastic. Warm regards,

Estupendo retrato, sensacional mirada y sonrisa captada, con una excelente luz y tonos. ++

 

Saludos -Tolo.

Ricardo... A beautifully natural portrait.... Mike

 

 

thank for your commentaries, all of them help me to improve every day a litte bit more. Thanks also to Mark Chartrand for all the information and details in your commentary like said Jorge Fernandez "The photography lesson given by Mark is a treasure for me!". All the best..!

 

Ricardo

Una chica preciosa... y un retrato fantástico. Seguro que a ella le ha gustado :-)) Mi enhorabuena y gracias por tus siempre amables comentarios. Un abrazo.

You`v captured a nice expression of her. Well done!

exuberant joy... wonderful!

Beautiful shot Ricardo,an excellent portrait,love the colours.

very good portrait....

Very good portrait.................Regards Kawan

 

Very nice photo and model.

Wow! Excellent pix. regards, sofia.

I like her eyes

The capture of a wonderful smile!