Glam

Fantastic work, I love the pose and lighting.

Alberto

Another great shot of this gorgeous woman Melissa.

The only thing that sticks out, no pun intended, is her nose and chin . There is some noticeable perspective distortion due to using too wide a lens too close to the subject. Use a longer lens and step back. An 85mm lens (on 35mm or FX) is normally considered the shortest lens to use for portraiture without getting perspective distortion. If you have the room, 100mm or 105mm is better.