begum

plz comment.

excellent.............

you have very good eye contact and an interesting expression. thsi young lady has a very attractive face . I would suggest you look at the lighting. the exi data says F32 I think this is really 3.2. as you have a vice soft effect also no catch lights in eyes. So looks like natural light. you should add a touch fill light a reflector would help here. A hair light would also not be bad. Maybe a touch more room would also be good.

Her lip gloss is not correctly applied, which makes her expression look very sour.