Kids, Lake Erie, Michigan

Your thoughts are welcome.

The introvert and the extrovert came to mind! Quite a dynamic composition Tim - and that dream-like atmosphere is appealing to me.

 

Best, David

liked this shot when you posted it on FB but so much cooler here. Its almost a graphic black and white and I really like your composition. The light/dark portions work really well...Ray

You've nudged this into the borderline of graphic art. I like the tension between the two experiences.

David - you are precisely right about the personalities and I thought they created a wonderful contrast

 

Ray - The "look" is kind of new for me and I'm still trying to fine tune it, but I really like

how it simplifies things and draws attention to what I feel is important

 

Jeff - for me it really came down to having enough to give structure or depth, instead of Jacob and Avery "floating" in white space, but I didn't want the beach scene to influence the viewer. I wanted this to be strictly about their personalities otherwise it's just two kids playing in the sand to me.

 

Thanks everyone!

very cool! Nice work Tim!!!