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andrzejp

Software: Adobe Photoshop CS4 Windows;


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Very nice. The hands form almost an arrow pointing to the face and the eyes, and the overall balance is perfect.

Interestingly, the black and white version conveys a different idea about the model's character...This is not unusual, and the special impact created by the B/W is well known, and used in advertising or movies. I was almost reminded of some very classic "films noirs" featuring Humphrey Bogart and some angel-looking but slightly dangerous creatures. I am certainly a pain, but I find the tiny strip of highlight at the top left disturbing, as it attracts the eye, and I would suggest to crop a tiny amount of top side, in such a way that the hat is still at a small distance from the side, but the clear area is removed. Alternately, the area could be darkened a bit in an image editing software.

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Yves,

 

You are not "pain" and you are correct. I noticed the same but I forgot to correct it. It is less visible on an average monitor, but on my home monitor it is quite visible especially on the B&W photo.

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I forgot to mention the extremely elegant position of the hands. This is very difficult to achieve. As a secondary pain, hiding or making less visible the black spot in the right top corner area would make the picture 100% perfect.....
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