Fashion contestant

Critique please

Really nice pse with expression to match. Good soft light. Hat set off nicely. I would to see a bit more light on the eyes. Well done regards ifti

Thanks Iftikhar for your critique. I have taken up your suggestion by lightening the eyes a little with a cropped colour version, now on critique. Regards John

Excellent portrait, John!

excellent pose, expression and naturality, composition, use of the light and B&W. Well done..!

 

Ricardo

Excellent work John, best regards. carlos

in all ways.

It is very refreshing and natural portrait.

Nice light and good (not disturbing) background.

Sincerely, Jukka

Magnífica luz, bello encuadre y gran edición, saludos cordiales Nell.

OMG, does she ever look like the young Cybill Shepherd! Amazing hat and face.

and elegant...

John,

How did I ever miss this photo. Marvelous B&W shot. I like the lighting too! Of course we should give "a little credit" to the gorgeous face of the model and inspired hat design. Just great!!

 I'm a bit late but gratefull for all your spendid comments,including Warren for your latest review of this remarkable girl.Regards John

This is a SUPERB portrait of a beautiful lady. Congrats.

Thanks Emmanuel for your most appreciative comment.Regards John