Atmosphere

I really like this Yasuo. It is a very natural, candid photo and your subject is on the right vertical third (I am a rule of thirds stickler!)

The background is a little too sharp for me, somewhat competing for your attention. I blurred it in stages to make it look like a much wider aperture was used and vignetted it a bit to draw more attention to her. What do you think?

Wow.

you are right! this is better image!

thanks