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Igor,

 

She is a pretty girl with a lovely smile. You have focused well on her eyes. I like the highlights on her face. Her skin tone is excellent. The background is nicely neutral. The contrast is very good. You have very good detail in the whites. Her toes are nicely pointed and they are seen from their sides which allows them to look thin, feminine and graceful. I would rather see her hands from their sides for the same reason as her feet, but they do look quite natural. Her make-up looks very good, but perhaps a tad too much blush. Her cheeks are a little too red for my tastes. The composition is very good.

 

I like your lighting, but I do wish she had a catch light visible in her eye to give it a little more life.

 

She has a white top, so you want to make sure to whiten her teeth. Any discoloration of the teeth will become very obvious with pure white in the photograph.

 

This is a portrait, and as much as I think the red panties are a nice touch, they do draw my eyes away from her face (over and over and over...). Any bright colors or a color that is different than the over all colors within the photograph will draw attention -- especially red.

 

She has a very nice shape, but unless she is very well toned, that position will cause her bottom and thighs to look a tiny bit large. I think she would have to be very thin to pull this pose off.

 

Your name and the date are not part of the photograph. They draw attention away from the girl. It would be proper to place them on the mat.

 

Nice shot,

 

Mark

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