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The body position and facial expression of the figure on the left commands immediate attention. This is supported by similar posture of the figure on the right.

On the left's figure, just below the subject's right hand (cam left), there is a foot of a person apparently seated behind her; because the tone of that foot is similar to that of her hand, I find it slightly distracting; I would recommend a touch of burn right there, to push the ankle of that foot back a little bit.

Similar burn for the white of the socks on the figure at right; exposure there gives the feet an odd illusion of position.

Except for those two areas, I would call it perfect.

It looks like you captured a moment of reaction in the subjects to something out of frame.