"Creating A Chalk World..."

Please share your thoughts...

 

deb

I feel the illustration at the top half of the photo is distracting; but, that it would be a good looking picture in its own right.

 

I think the subject here is the woman in the center. This is a picture of her, drawing.

 

Because her left leg (frame right) is stuck out to our right, I think this photo would do better with a horizontal orientation. Bottom of the frame would maybe ride just below the leaves and the flowers of the green hair in the chalk drawing.

 

Because of the curve of her arm, tilt of her torso, and activity of her hand, along with that kicked out leg; I think a point of view from the left of this camera position might have shown her better. Maybe left, a little higher, with the camera axis looking more down on the drawing.

I also would love to see this as a portrait of the artist at work without the people in the background. She has a great look and is making terrific work.

Impressionism in the back, a Ppunk-lady and naive art. Great unification. BR Joerg