je ne regrette rien 67 Posted November 17, 2009 A=5. O=5. I would have tried not placing her in the dead centre of the picture. A larger crop could have emphasised the concept of loneliness. Link to comment
ray.koushik 0 Posted November 18, 2009 Very good composition...I am a bit surprised by the marks it received. compliments -koushik Link to comment
Funtak 0 Posted November 18, 2009 Thank you for your comment. The way I see it, cropping would destroy entire concept, composition, other than that, her had/focus is obviously not in the centre.. Link to comment
Funtak 0 Posted November 18, 2009 I am not surprised and I dont care anymore much about ratings that came from anonymous; I guess there are many of them with no portfolios on PN that comment/rate other members immages. I've seen tens of thousands photos on PN and I think it's hard to find realy original, well crafted photo, maybe 5 or 10% at the best. Like in politics, everybody have the right to vote, even criminals, mentaly ill, retarded, pedofiles, alchoholics, child molesters, illiterate, extremists, rasists, all kind of social parasites etc. Link to comment
andrea-de-bonis 6 Posted November 18, 2009 is very nice. the reason is, at my opinion, that the circular lines and the attentive posture of your subject makes drives our eyes on right, looking for something out of the frame.. and the selective dof is perfect, enfatize the curves Link to comment
3m 0 Posted November 18, 2009 This is a really very nice portrait. I think it's captivating and it's a beautiful composition. The circular lines add much to this. As Andrea says, it makes the eye wanting to follow them. I believe that your subject is in exactly the right spot too. I like this picture very much. Congratulations with this photo, and kind regards, Marjolein Link to comment
Funtak 0 Posted November 18, 2009 Thank You very much for your comments, I do appreciate it.. Link to comment
heider 0 Posted November 18, 2009 Very nicely composed. Beautiful DOF. Generous and rich tones. Indeed a very good B&W. Kind Regards. Link to comment
pfranklin 0 Posted November 18, 2009 I have no critique....I just really like this Warm regards, Pamela Link to comment
blue-olympus 0 Posted November 18, 2009 Captivating shot of this woman lost in her thoughts, your processing is excellent for the message here. Love your explanation regarding anon. voting, made me smile, well done Vladimir...Regards Link to comment
rlopezmoral 1 Posted November 18, 2009 As every interesting capture, this lovely scene allows different ways of composition ... and i like your version very much , Vlad ... focus & tones are perfect !! I'm totally agree with your explanation about the scores in PN ... you made me smile. A big hug. Link to comment
jtipton 0 Posted November 18, 2009 Great addition Vladimir- Wonderful composition and a great job on the conversion. Well done and regards-Jim Link to comment
pietje 0 Posted November 18, 2009 very interesting composition Vladimir. It is realy a photo keeping up the attention. .. piet Link to comment
sumon_mukherjee 0 Posted November 18, 2009 Very attractive composition with nice bw tonality. Best regards. Link to comment
gallego 1 Posted November 18, 2009 Buena composición y tonos. With perfect selective approach. Max.a. Saludos. Link to comment
Funtak 0 Posted November 18, 2009 Thank you very much for good vibrations on this one... Link to comment
lizweisiger 0 Posted November 19, 2009 Wonderful capture, Vladimir. You've created a dramatic and simple scene which makes me wish I knew her story. Link to comment
wieslawmamon 0 Posted November 20, 2009 I like the feeling of melancholy in this simple and effective composition, the curved lines of benches look like the waves of thoughts that vibrate in the woman's head, also think the b&w conversion matches perfectly the atmosphere here. Congratulations, best regards. Link to comment
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