Pictorialism #1

I need some advice as I'm not quite satisfied with this shot.

Thank you for viewing. :)

I don't know Gabriele, maybe the pundits can come up with some valid critiques, but I like it as it is. The only thing I would suggest is to get rid of the stray hairs on her right shoulder. Otherwise, to me, this is a very beautiful artistic image.

 

Best,

Micfhael

Thanks Michael, I was unsure of the yellow shade I used to recreate a Caravaggio-like lighitng.

 

I'll try to remove the loose hair :)

Very nice photo. Beautiful composition and colours. Great use of lighting. Very well done.

Very nice, excelent. Congratulations!

The composition works well, the colors are luscious, and the soft lighting on the model is pleasing. My only suggestion is to look at the brightest point in the image. In this case that appears to be the front of her right hand and the yellow rose. My eye is repeatedly drawn there despite the richness of the rest of the image.

well done

Excellent, I love this one among others too.