Anguish

My niece's twin boys were five days old at this shoot. Their smallstomachs weren't very cooperative, so I'll go back in a couple weeks.It was great to have other adults around whose job it was to care forthe kids so that I didn't have to feel guilty about taking photoswhile the boys cried.

This was my first experiment lighting with an off-camera speedlitethrough a translucent umbrella. It was located high about 120 degreesto camera right, which means nearly straight up as the photo isoriented. Shot with my Vivitar (Kiron) 28/2.5 lens.

Any suggestions for improvement?